第37页 詩歌改寫

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"Out in the Dark"
It was a windy and snowy night. One could hardly see anything with snow falling down. One could see, however, vaguely, a doe walking with a fawn in the snow. The wind keeps blowing while the light of the stars dims and weakens.
The darkness secretly haunts around the land. When a lamp dies out in one instant, shorter than the swiftest hound escaping, everything drowns in the dark. 
Now in the darkness, I, the star, the wind, and the deer are the remaining moving thing. We are together, feel near to each other, yet we are far. Fear drums my ear, and drearies my heart in the company of ancient fright.  
Before the mighty being comes, love and delight is the sight of all the universe. If you do not love the light of night as love and delight, the light of the world is weak and little.