《顾家北手把手教你雅思写作》的原文摘录

  • 开头 1.法律指的是那些实施在人们身上的规则。(背景句) 2.虽然法律在规范人们行为上非常重要,但是我认为它约束个人的自由主部分(改写题目) 第一段 3.如果社会成员不遵守法律,社会就没有秩序,经济很难发展。(社会) 4.如果一些人不遵守交通规则,交通事故就会增加,交通堵塞也会成为一个问题(X)。(举例1) 5.在网络上卖假货的人不受惩罚,消费者就不敢买东西,经济就会受影响。 主部分第二段 6.人们如果不遵守道德准则和社会规范(X),人和人之间就会缺乏尊重和信任。(中心句个人福利) 7.人们有时候会因为自己的利益驱使去做一些伤害别人的事情。 8.如果人们出卖朋友,他们就不会合作做事情,社会就会缺乏凝聚力(x)(举例1) 29.如果人们不守信用,他们就很难一起做生意,而争执会影响生产力(举例2) 第三段 10.然而,有时候,法律不可避免地会抑制个人自由,甚至会阻碍社会发展(中心句,个人福利) 11.例如,一个国家如果对商业实施很多的限制,商业活动就会不够活跃(举例1) 12.如果高收入人群要交很高的收入税,他们可能没有动力去付出更多的努力,提高他们的收入。(举例2) 13.政府可以放松一些限制,鼓励大家创新(x),这样有利于社会发展。(结果) 结尾段 14.认为社会没有了法律和规则就不能够很好地运转是合理的。(再次表明立场) 15.尽管法律不能让人随心所欲地行为,其主要目的是创造一个大家可以和谐生活的社会(X)。(总结观点) (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2回复 1赞 2017-12-10 22:27:31
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  • many parts of the worldmass production means of food preparationmedical nceds medical svstem meet the growing demandmeet the requirements members of society mental health problems method of learning metro station migrate to cities minor crimes minority languages money is a great motivator moral principles mother tongue movement of population 维持秩序 制造正面差异 管理时间 理财 制造业 世界上的许多地方大规模生产 食品制备方法 医疗需求 医疗系统 满足日益增长的需求符合要求 社会成员 心理健康问题 学习方法 地铁站 迁移到城市 轻的罪行 少数民族语言 缓解这个问题 钱是一种强大的动力道德原则 母语 人口流动 native language newest generation next generation noise pollution nutritional content obesity epidemic obey the law of educational value online course opportunities for economic prosperit Tganise events overcome difficulties overcome language barriers 母语 最新一代 下一代 噪声污染 营养成分 O 肥胖症的流行遵守法律 具有教育价值在... (查看原文)
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  • overweight peop parts of the world pay tax permanent job personal resources to draw uponpersonal wealth personality traits poor employment prospectspoor eyesight poor grades poor living conditionspopulation shift poses a threat to people's health pour more money in practical implicationspre-prepared food present their information prison sentence problem-solving abilities promote brain 超重人群 P 世界各地 纳税 稳定的工作 利用个人资源个人财富 人格特质 就业前景不佳视力不好 成绩差 生活条件差 人口迁移 对人们的健康构成投入更多的钱实践意义 预先准备好的食物展示他们的信息徒刑 解决问题的能力促进大脑(发育 mote economy developmetprone to poor health public money ublic services public transport system pursue a degree put their ideas into practice put us in a good mood raising airfares raising environmental awareness raising funds rapidly changing receive a good education ec... (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2018-01-01 18:01:26
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  • reduce diseases reduce life expectancy reduce our pressure reduce the environmental impact reduce the strain on reduce work efficiency reduced the cost reform offenders regulating our behaviour rehabilitation programs reintegrating into society relax regulations replay the video restrict our freedom reverse this trend revitalise the local economy rewarding experience rite of passage run a small busines run out of money running cost 减少疾病 减少预期寿命 减轻我们的压力 减少对环境的影响 减轻对……的压力 降低工作效率 降低成本 改造罪犯 规范我们的行为 康复计划 重新融入社会 放宽规定 重播视频 限制我们的自由 扭转这一趋势 振兴地方经济 令人有所收获的经历 成人礼 经营 企业钱用完 运行成本 safe community salt and calories sample local food satisfy their needs sedentary lifestyle senior workers sense of community sensitive to prices sentenced to prison set up a business sharpen their skills sharpening sk... (查看原文)
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  • sit in front of a screen slow pace of work social experience social lives social network social norms social progress social relationships social responsibilities social rules society cannot advance solve math problems sound financial planning stifle children's creativity strict discipline strict upbringing strong appetite suits students needs 坐在屏幕前 放缓工作步伐 社会经验 社会生活 社交网络 社会规范 社会进步 社会关系 社会责任 社会规则 社会不能进步 解决数学问题 健全的财务规划 扼杀孩子的创造力 严肃的纪律 严格的教养 旺盛的食欲 满足学生需要 take away their study time take stock of their lives tax revenue technological innovation technological progress the airl the last years of life theoretical knowledge threaten social stability throw-away culture tightening regulation on times of economic recession to push forward the boundaries of knowledge traditional cuis... (查看原文)
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  • The charts present findings about what affected Britishstudents when they chose a college The availability of suitable courses and degrees wasthe most important consideration in both years, althougithe proportion of students who chose this factor droppedfrom 40% to 34%. They were also more concerned with thereputation of the university, with one quarter of respondents ating this highly in 2002, in contrast to only 5% in 1982The percentage of students who valued the access toamenities and sports facilities more than tripled from 5%to 18% in 2002, by which time this factor had become the third most common reason for choosing a university The location was also a significant consideration andthe percentage of students who paid attention to this didnot change remarkably (16% in 2002 and 19% in... (查看原文)
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  • 改写题目 The charts compare the amounts of electricity created by different nergy sources in two countries in 1980 and 2000 (查看原文)
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  • 主偏8月第一段(较王要的能最 The units of electricity created by coal, the main energy source in大利亚的高值 Australia, more than doubled to130in200 but this encrgy source a,然后对比法国 was much less import in France, producing25 units of electricity only in both years. Nuclear power was the prominent energy source in France, with the gure rising more than eight fold to 126 units in 2000, but Australie did not use this energy source 王出二段(猫国他的能) The amount of electricity created by hydro power also increased significantly from 20 to 36 units in Australia, while this fuel source was less important in France, creating 2 units of electricity only in 2000 The figures for natural gas declined in both countries to 2 units The proportion of electricity created by oil also saw a different tren in these two countries, incre... (查看原文)
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  • The pie chart presents information about the causes of land in the world and the table shows how three regions of改写题目 the world were affected by this proble (查看原文)
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  • 王佩B分第一段(第一个田,先说最的 over-grazing,后值 最高值 over-grazing was the primary cause of the world's land degradation. with around 35% of land around the world degraded by this 然后说一下其他值 Deforestation and over-cultivation were responsible for 30% and 28% of degradation respectively, while the remaining 7% was attributed to other problems 王分第二段(第二个圆,先说 Europe B的最,后分开说月他的值,王国家/1D区的t 最高值239%0,和其他 urope had the largest proportion of unproductive land at239% 两个地方相比 nearly twice the figure for Oceania and more than four times the level of degradation in North America. Deforestation was the principal reason for land degradation in Europe(9. 8%)and the proportions of land degraded by this cause in 里的9.8°6 7.7%e of land, compared with 3.3% in North America In contrast, over-grazing was severe in Oceania, reduci... (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2018-02-04 20:49:25
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  • The bar chart compares students of different ages in terms of what motivates them to study and the support they receive from王分第一段(第一个,先i说 for career的모,9然后i说 for interest Young people study primarily to further their careers, with up to 最高值是年轻人为了80% of those under the age of26 studying for this purpose.This 职业学习的百分比 figure is significantly higher than the proportion of those who study It of personal interest The gap between these two proportions narrows as students get 然后描述趋势 older, and the figures for those aged 40 to 49 are the same(40%) Students aged over 49 overwhelmingly study for interest(70%), 最后说一下 for inte rather than for career (under 20%) 主部分第二段(第二个) Around 60% of students aged under 26 receive support from 最高值和最低值 employers for further educato The figure drops steadily with age... (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2018-02-04 21:19:03
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  • In contrast, older students, namely, those in their forties and those最后描述数据 aged 50 or more, are more likely to gain support (35% and 42%6E段 Overall, younger students are more likely to study for career 总结趋势和主要特征 purposes, while their older counterparts are more motivated by personal interest. Employers give more support to younger students than to employees of other ages (查看原文)
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  • 范文全文及点评 The line graph shows the amount of energy consumed inthe US from 1980 to 2015, as well as projected consumption Petrol and oil are the most important energy sourcesthroughout the period: despite fluctuation in the first 15years, the consumption of these two fuels rose steadily,and this is projected to persist, reaching 50g in 2030. Coalwas as important as natural gas before 2015, but the gapbetween these two fuels is likely to widen. While the amountof coal consumed is predicted to climb to 30g in 2030, thefigure for natural gas will possibly remain stable at 25q Other fuel sources are less significant. Nuclear powerconsumption saw a steady increase to around 8q in 2005and maintained this level until 2015, after which the level ofconsumption will not experience any remarkable chang... (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2018-02-04 23:13:52
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  • The bar chart compares five major cities in terms of the changes in the cost of an average house over a period of 13 years、主似月第一段(从 London开贴说起,后说 New Yo水k,两个市第二个明间的长 Between 1996 and 2002. London saw the biggest increase最高值是Lon housing prices of these cities (over 10%o), despite a drop of around 7%6 in the previous period The figure for New York showed a similar pattem, declining by 5%然后说 New Yor during the first five year period but rising by 5% in the following 6 years 王似月二段(后 Tokyo,下一直很大) Tokyo was the only city where the average house price dropped in both periods, around 7%o in the five years and then another 5%o王仰8分第三段(他的城市) Madrid and Frankfurt The costs of an average home in both Madrid and Frankfurt climbed before the year 1996, 1% and 2%o respectively While pri... (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2018-02-06 10:48:53
    —— 引自章节:4.4.6
  • The chart provides data about the waste production of six countries改写题目 in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000 王分第一段(从最值国开贴说起,后说比较的值,包括pan, Horea The US produced significantly more waste than other countries did 最高值是US and the amount of waste produced by this country nearly doubled from 2003 million tonnes to 4005 during the period. The rising trend was also seen in Japan, where the waste rose from 然后说Ja 44 to 52 million tonnes. The waste output of Korea, in contrast, showed a marked decreas 最后说K to 19 million in 2000, with no figure provided for the year 1980 主8分第二日段(后说他值亡较的国家) 个国家的特点 The waste production was noticeably lower in other countries While the figures for Ireland and Poland increased slightly to 3其他三个国家的数字and5 million tonnes respectively, the waste produced in ... (查看原文)
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    —— 引自章节:4.4.7
  • The charts show the changes in the age profile of two countries in two separate years, 2000 and 2050 王似8月一段(失写 Yemen2050年的最值15~59多的人,国次14下BA要和大进行对亡) 最高值是15-59岁的 In Yemen, the proportion of people aged15to59 is expected to rise significantly from 46. 3% to 57. 3% in 2050 对比意大利的这一年 This age group will also make up the largest proportion of Italy?3 population(46.2%)in 2050, despite a decline from 61.6%in 2000 The figures for those aged under 14 are likely to drop in both 然后说14岁以下的人 countries.Only37% of yemen's population is projected to fall into this age group, while the figure was much higher at 50. 1% in 2000 对比意大利 In Italy, the figure will decline to a lesser extent from 14. 3% to 11.5%. (查看原文)
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    —— 引自章节:4.4.8
  • 第二段:写走年人 最高值是意大利的老 Those aged60 or above are projected to represent42.3% of Italy population in 2050, an increase of around 18%然后说 Yemen的老年 Yemen is also likely to see an increase in the proportion of elderly people in 2050 at 5.7%, although this age group will represent the smallest section of the population Overall, the projection is that the populations of both countries will 总结趋势和主要特征征 become older. Italy had an older population than Yemen in the year 2000, and the same is also predicted in 2050 (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2018-02-06 16:31:00
    —— 引自章节:4.4.8
  • The line graph provides the information about the quantity of goods改写题目 transported in the United Kingdom by four means of transport over the period 1974 to 200 主分一段先写值Road,9然后写 Water Shipping goods by road was the most popular choice throughout the period, with around 70 million tonnes of goods delivered by this 最高值是Road mode of transport in 1974. The total amount had since then risen steadily, despite fluctuation, and reached about 100 million by 2002 The rising trend was also seen in transporting goods by water. The figure climbed to just under 60 million in 1982, after which it held 然后说 Water steady at this level and then increased again to over 60 million 王分二段(先写Rai,写 Pipeli There was an opposite trend in the use of trains for shipment. The 第三高值Rail ount of good... (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2018-02-07 14:29:44
    —— 引自章节:4.4.9
  • The chart compares men and women in Australia in terms of the改写别日 subjects they studied in 1995. 主似分第一段(A从g性值开贴说起,注和性的比较) The biggest gender difference rst to 27男性的最高值是 92 of 然后说 Computin和 The gender gap was also clear in Maths and Computing. with around of fe 14% and 10% of males pursuing a degree in these two fields 295 主8分第二段(从性B的最值开贴道,注照分组 文性的最高值是 Arts In contrast, female students' favourite subject was Arts& Humanities, where they outnumbered men (19% to 13%) 女性的第二最高值是 Health was another popular subject, attracting15% of female Health students, more than three times the figure for men(only 4%) 描述 Educat 18/ Women were also more likely to study education than men(10% 女性多过男性,和上and6% respectively 面的两个科目性质比 王部分第三段(余的群目) The gender gap was narrow in Accounting E... (查看原文)
    [已注销] 2018-02-07 16:15:27
    —— 引自章节:4.4.10