引自《黑暗之心》上海交大出版社(2024版)评注本第1页
“The Nellie, a cruising yawl, swung to her anchor without a flutter of the sails, and was at rest. The flood had made, the wind was nearly calm:关于这里的翻译,一般来说可以按照英文原文的句序,先说到“帆船稳稳地停住”,再说“潮水上涨,风也几乎停息”。但是仔细推敲,不如两句话颠倒翻译为好。这是为了照顾汉语的行文习惯,在汉语表达中,文章或者演讲的开篇,往往先点明时令和风物,再开始进入叙事。例如苏轼在《前赤壁赋》中开篇写道“壬戌之秋,七月既望,苏子与客泛舟游于赤壁之下。”这是先点明时令再叙事;之后写道“清风徐来,水波不兴。举酒属客,诵明月之诗,歌窈窕之章。”这是先描绘景色后叙事。现代作家也擅用这种开篇形式,譬如在处女作《苍穹神剑》的开头,古龙初次落笔就这样写道:“江南春早,草长莺飞。斜阳三月,夜间仍有萧索之意。”而后才引入到故事人物的出场。又如金庸在收官之作《鹿鼎记》开篇写道:“北风如刀,满地冰霜。江南近海滨的一条大路上,一队清兵手执刀枪,押着七辆囚车,冲风冒寒,向北而行。”除了英汉之间句序的差别之外,两种语言形式也有不同。英语一般来说不拘于句式,而汉语中多用四字格叠句,具有一种平衡和谐之美。因此这里开篇翻译为“河水漫涨,风止浪平。奈利号连帆都没有抖动一下,就吃住锚链,稳稳地停泊下来。”此处虽为表达上的细节,但是只有用心体悟,于细节处多留意,才能保证文学作品翻译既准确,又优美,如许渊冲所说“缔造出一位忠诚的美人”。倘若失去了文学性,即使翻译得再字字如实,也已“奈何明珠变鱼目”,失去了文学作品的题中应有之义。当然,凡事过犹不及,翻译也是如此。直译和意译作为两种不可或缺的手段,应酌情配... (查看原文)
Conrad certainly has an excellent command of English, despite it being his third language. Yet I'm somehow impatient with terrifying tales loaded with symbolism.
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1 有用 YuSi 2008-10-25 05:15:20
康拉德的<黑暗的心>, 通过一次在"荒蛮"非洲的经历来反思西方的"文明"社会
0 有用 克莱德思构坡 2012-07-31 02:11:22
无所畏惧才是最可怕的,魔由心生,个人悲剧反映时代悲剧
0 有用 点点 2009-08-13 00:13:47
Conrad certainly has an excellent command of English, despite it being his third language. Yet I'm somehow impatient with terrifying tales loaded with symbolism.
0 有用 宁寄浮云 2010-01-27 23:13:13
当年的“短篇小说”课上读这个,读抽了
0 有用 Sans Serif 2016-06-30 09:09:47
阅读黑暗之心的过程中我一直在脑补现代启示录里湄公河的热带雨林……