Little poetry on a Sunday morning. Breakfast in bed. More touched by the fact that I'm able to confortably finish a book in a morning's time. Beautiful. Otheriwise I don't think I'll remember much. Bought shoes from Italy. Now I feel I talk like a poet.;)
后面的比前面的好，长诗比短诗好，几部组诗尤其出色。诗集的题目比较弱诶，我觉得可以用Marathon那首当书题...at a depth where only the dream matters and the bond with any one soul is meaningless; you throw it away. 马拉松传递火炬的比喻非常新鲜新颖(又有古典背景)，虽然整首诗颇晦涩不解，但是那感觉棒极了。或者用Day Without Night做书名，Apparently , a like sun burns in hell. It is hell, day without night.多酷。
2 有用 闻人林 2020-10-18 19:44:56
Little poetry on a Sunday morning. Breakfast in bed. More touched by the fact that I'm able to confortably finish a book in a morning's time. Beautiful. Otheriwise I don't think I'll remember much. Bought shoes from Italy. Now I feel I talk like a poet.;)
1 有用 拉维克 2020-10-13 13:15:53
后面的比前面的好，长诗比短诗好，几部组诗尤其出色。诗集的题目比较弱诶，我觉得可以用Marathon那首当书题...at a depth where only the dream matters and the bond with any one soul is meaningless; you throw it away. 马拉松传递火炬的比喻非常新鲜新颖(又有古典背景)，虽然整首诗颇晦涩不解，但是那感觉棒极了。或者用Day Without Night做书名，Apparently , a like sun burns in hell. It is hell, day without night.多酷。
0 有用 那颗晴空 2023-10-14 08:37:19 北京
补记。R.I. P……
0 有用 咳嗽 2021-08-31 06:21:57
对Elms有点不友好 读到The Mountain 不知道说什么 人如何才能互相理解呢