曲江二首

穿花蝴蝶深深见
杜甫的深见视野：《望岳》“决眦入归鸟”，《自京窜至凤翔喜达行在所三首》“眼穿当落日”，他总要看到所见之外。有时看到看不见的东西，比如《对雪》“炉存火似红”。类似地，听到听不见的，同诗“战哭多新鬼”，《兵车行》“新鬼烦冤旧鬼哭，天阴雨湿鸣啾啾”。
穿花蝴蝶深深见，也有这个意思。诗眼对画工的超越，把现实运动捕捉到有深度的语言图像中。
又，读《对雪》想起夏济安《现代英文选评注》里一篇小说的描写：
“By a closer and more searching eye than the moon's everything belonging to the Mortons' might have been seen……
“A fire still fluttered in the grate, …… and its exhausted light beat up and down the wall, across the rafters, and over the dark pallet where the old people lay, like a bird trying to find its way out of the room.”