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读剧本给我感觉Newt是明线，Credence是暗线，但明显两边是同等比重。只可惜后来罗婶对Credence这条真正的主线展开不够，矛盾和冲突都太急匆匆了，真心希望下部会改进。
另外感情线依然是短板，习惯就好。

开头的报纸内容：
..1926 relating to Grindelwald's attacks all over the world:
Grindelwald Strikes Again in Europe, Hogwarts School Increases Security, Anti-wizard Feeling On the Rise, Where Is Grindelwald? Is Anyone Safe?
电影里德语部分翻译过来是“Who Is Grindelwald?” 应该是在瑞士附近。
后面酒吧里也有张格林德沃的报道：
A glimpse of Gellert Grindelwald: Wanted for No-maj Slaying In Europe.

Graves描述：
smart clothing, very handsome, early middle-age, his demeanor differs from those around him. He is watchful, tightly coiled, an air of intense confidence.

The Second Salem:
Credence stands with his head bowed, embarrassed, nervous.
...
"And then take the freaks with you." 
Credence perceptibly twitches, disturbed by anger in his vicinity. Mary Lou is calm but steely.
Behind Credence, Modesty's eyes burn. She clutches Credence's hand protectively.

Graves and Credence:
BROADWAY——
The Woolworth Building looms ahead. Credence glances toward it with a hint of longing. Graves stands outside, watching Credence intently. Credence spots him, hope flickering across his face. Utterly enthralled, Credence moves across the street toward Graves, barely looking where he's going--everything else is forgotten.
...
A pause. Graves rests a hand on Credence's arm. The human contact seems to both startle and captivate Credence.
卧槽看到这里有点吓坏，不知道罗婶是不是有意，这俩之间动作描写是真的有性骚扰倾向的啊。
Graves Apparates into the alleyway. Credence, startled, back away, but Graves makes straight for him, his tone and manner urgent, forceful.
...
Graves, impatient for feigning calm, holds out his hand -- suddenly seeming caring, affectionate.
好了这边能看到是故意了的。why(P180 - 183)
Graves gently, almost seductively, moves his thumb across the cuts, healing them instantly. Credence stares.
...
Graves: I want you to have this, Credence. I would trust very few with it --
Graves moves close, placing the chain around Credence's neck as he whispers:
"Very Few."
Graves places his hands on either side of Credence's neck, drawing him in, his speech quit, intimate.
Credence is unsure, both nervous of and attracted by Graves's behavior.
Graves rests his hand on Credence's heart, covering the pendant.
Graves moves even closer to Credence, his face inches from the boy's neck -- the effect is both alluring and threatening -- as he whispers.
唉。
Graves pulls Credence into a hug, which, with his hand on Credence's neck, seems more controlling than affectionate. Credence, overwhelmed by the seeming affection, closes his eyes and relaxes slightly. 
Graves slowly backs away, stroking Credence's neck. Credence keeps his eyes closed, longing for the human contact to continue.
在Credence说help me的时候突然turns vicious and slaps hard across Credence's face的Graves...后面在发现Modesty不是破坏源的时候也一秒"Modesty is nothing to him now."
唉……

Newt可爱！可爱！！
...Jacob recoils dramatically, but this was evidently Newt's idea of a little joke.
Newt (smiling to himself): "Probably shouldn't let him loose in here, though."

Newt与obscurus的交际会不会引到Ariana线....
Jacob looks at Newt, who is momentarily lost in a bad reverie. Newt turns abruptly away and heads back toward the hut, his tone colder, more efficient, no longer happy to play about in the case.
...
Tina: It's an unstable, uncontrollable Dark force that busts out and -- and attacks...and then vanishes..."
P159
Newt: It's an Obscurus — But it's not what you think. I managed to separate it from the Sudanese girl as I tried to save her — I wanted to take it home, to study it...But it cannot survive outside that box, it could not hurt anyone, Tina!
Graves: So it's useless without the host?
卧槽这么接一句give away too much啊老格！！
港真这里老格下一秒就知道自己说漏嘴，还急着让他们go die....为什么要这样写。
Newt places his case down on the ground near the Erumpent and slowly, seductively, opens it.
He begins to perform a "matting ritual" — a series of grunts, wiggles, rolls, and groans — to gain the Erumpent's attention.
雀斑是个好演员（。

老格：
Graves holds a finger to his lips, signaling for Tina to be silent. The gesture is patronizing, but authoritative.
而且借Newt的口说出老格想干的“To provoke war between the magical and non-magical worlds....Mass slaughter for the greater good, you mean?”
主角四个溜了的时候，有幕老格：
Graves moves down the stairs with urgency. For the first time, a look of panic on his face.
Awhttp://www....老格你（。
后来真是个明显二元分化：对力量狂热的迷恋和对人的冷漠
Graves continues to whip Newt, a manic, crazed look in his eyes.
...the Obscurus rising up and blasting down the tunnel toward Graves.
Graves is mesmerized -- he falls to his knees beneath the vast black mass - pleading in wonder.
等等所以最后他决定回头是因为他好生气要发泄？？？？？
Graves thinks for a moment -- a sneer of derision and irritation crossing his face. He turns.
Graves strike confidently back along the platform..

Leta Lestrange:
Queenie (concerned): She was a taker. You need a giver. 
这里用过去时但最后Newt又用现在时……
Newt: I don't really know what Leta likes these days because people change.

Jacob and Queenie:
...She reads his mind and her expression changes to one of wonderment and tenderness as she sees what he went through in the war. Queenie is moved and appalled.

P238有详细描写Credence的obscurial一直被傲罗们攻击。
最后剧本也明确写了Credence跑了：
...Newt sees a tendril of black matter, a small part of the Obscurus, floating down through the roof. Unnoticed by anyone else, it eventually floats up and away, trying to reconnect with its host.

Grindelwald:
Graves transforms. He is no longer dark, but blond and blue-eyed.
说好的蓝眼呢！！！！！
As Grindelwald reaches Newt, he pauses -- both smiling and sneering.
"Will we die, just a little?"
然而newt is bemused（。
这句话我真是想破头也不知道肥格装的是什么B，只有可能是后续里面的主线剧情之一了。